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TASK 11 //

SCRIPTING

*BLACK SCREEN*

 

*PRODUCTION COMPANY LOGO FADES ON AND OFF SCREEN*

 

*FILM TITLE FADES ONTO SCREEN AND IS CUT FROM*

 

*SOPHIE IS SEEN BRUSHING HER HAIR IN THE MIRROR*

 

*SHE WALKS TOWARDS HER BAG ON THE FLOOR, PICKS IT UP, PLACES IT ON THE BED AND REPLACES SCHOOL BOOKS FOR HER MAKE UP, OYSTER CARD AND A DRINK*

 

*SHE PLACES HEADPHONES IN HER EARS AND WALKS OUT THE HOUSE, WHERE THE NON-DIEGETIC OF HER MUSIC BEGINS TO PLAY*

 

*SOPHIE WALKS THROUGH AN ALLEYWAY AND SUBWAY, WHERE SHE FINALLY GETS TO THE OUTSIDE OF HER SCHOOL*

 

*SOPHIE WALKS TOWARDS ENTRANCE OF SCHOOL, THEN BEGINS REMEMBERING THE BULLIES AT HER SCHOOL AND EVENTUALLY HAS A PANIC ATTACK*

 

*FADES INTO BLACK SCREEN*

 

Sophie (voiceover): ENOUGH! I can't do this anymore, I can't let this go on. I won't let this be the centre of darkness for me. I won't let them take over, those voices I head day after day reminding me of how I will never be seen as one of them. Never be seen for who I truly am. Negativity is the enemy of my originality. Every expression of who I am is criticised. Watchful eyes judging the very essence of my being. My concealing make up shields me from disapproving glances, while my eyes plunge you into a darkness that diverts from my emotions. Trapped, isolated, lost - all the things I've only ever known to feel when I'm around others. The false assumptions relentlessly thrown at me have become a fragment of my reality, constantly having to deal with the perceptions from others. The loneliness has overcome me, my life, my everything. Everyday I embark on a lonely journey, but the worst loneliness I face is the fear of never being comfortable in my own skin. What others don't seem to understand is - all that ever matters about a person is beyond the surface. I continue to be myself, hoping one day that they'll see who I truly am. Surely it's only a matter of time until they finally understand.

 

*SOPHIE CONTINUES WALKING UNTIL A HALL IS VISIBLE IN THE SHOT, WHERE SHE EVENTUALLY WALKS IN AND A POSTER FOR A VIOLIN RECITAL BECOMES VISIBLE*

 

*SOPHIE ENTERS THE HALL AND WALKS TOWARDS THE OTHERS IN THE HALL WHERE THEY ARE SAT*

 

*SHOTS ARE SHOWN OF SOPHIE AND VARIOUS OTHERS PLAYING INSTRUMENTS IN THEIR REHEARSAL, UNTIL THE SCREEN EVENTUALLY CUTS TO A BLACK SCREEN IMMEDIATELY AFTER A CLOSE UP IS USED SHOWING SOPHIE PLAYING THE VIOLIN*

For my short film, it was essential for a script to be formed in order for the structure of my film to be completely planned before beginning the construction phase. This script allowed me to plot out the exact storyline, where shots would be changed, locations would be moved and sounds would be transitioned when final editing had occurred. I had made various adjustments from my first script, as I had received constructive criticism on various aspects of the dialogue throughout the short film. The voiceover which I plan to implement will be played while the protagonist is walking to the hall, which I will need to record separately using a professional microphone.

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